אני רוצה לדעת אם יש עמלה על ההעברה הזאת.

A common transliteration is:

Ani rotzeh lada'at im yesh amlah al ha-ha'avara hazot.

If the speaker is female, rotzeh is pronounced rotzah instead.

A few stress points:

• lada'AT
• amLAH
• ha'avaRAH
• haZOT

Hebrew often needs the subject pronoun in the present tense because the present-tense form does not clearly show person.

רוצה can mean:

• I want
• you want
• he wants

depending on context, for a masculine singular form.

So אני makes it clearly mean I.

רוצה is the present-tense form of לרצות = to want.

It agrees with gender and number, not with person in the way English does.

So:

• male speaker: אני רוצה
• female speaker: אני רוצה
  same spelling, but pronounced rotzah

Plural forms are:

• אנחנו רוצים for a mixed group or all males
• אנחנו רוצות for all females

לדעת is the infinitive to know.

After רוצה, Hebrew usually uses an infinitive:

• אני רוצה לדעת = I want to know

So this is the normal Hebrew structure for want to know.

In context, לדעת can sometimes feel like to find out, not just to possess knowledge.

Here אם means whether / if in an indirect yes-no question:

• אני רוצה לדעת אם... = I want to know whether...

It is not a conditional if like If it rains, I’ll stay home, even though English uses the same word.

So in this sentence, אם introduces the idea whether there is a fee.

יש means there is / there are.

So:

• יש עמלה = there is a fee

Hebrew usually does not use a present-tense form of to be the way English does. Instead, for existence, it uses יש.

A useful pair:

• יש = there is / there are
• אין = there isn’t / there aren’t

Because the sentence means:

• עמלה = a fee / any fee
• ההעברה הזאת = this transfer / a specific transfer

So the fee is indefinite, but the transfer is definite.

That matches English pretty well:

• a fee
• this transfer

Because the base noun is העברה = transfer.

When Hebrew adds the definite article ה־ = the, it goes in front of the whole noun:

• העברה = transfer
• ההעברה = the transfer

So the double ה is completely normal here.

In pronunciation, it comes out roughly like:

ha-ha'avara

In Hebrew, demonstratives like this usually come after the noun:

• ההעברה הזאת = this transfer

That is the normal Hebrew order.

Also, הזאת must agree with the noun:

• העברה is feminine singular
• so Hebrew uses הזאת

Compare:

• masculine singular: הספר הזה = this book
• feminine singular: ההעברה הזאת = this transfer

Yes. In modern spoken Hebrew, הזו is very common.

So both are possible:

• ההעברה הזאת
• ההעברה הזו

They both mean this transfer.

A rough difference:

• הזאת can sound a bit fuller or slightly more formal/standard
• הזו is very common in everyday speech

In Hebrew, fees are often described as being charged על something:

• עמלה על ההעברה = a fee on/for the transfer

This is natural Hebrew in banking and service contexts.

You may also hear:

• עמלה עבור ההעברה = a fee for the transfer

That is also correct, but על is very common and natural here.