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In Malay, dia means “he” or “she” (third-person singular, human). It does not show gender.
You can only know the gender from:
- Context: Previous sentences might mention a man or a woman.
- Names or roles: e.g. Ali senyum. Dia senyum apabila… → dia = he.
- Extra words: e.g. lelaki (man), perempuan (woman), abang (older brother), kakak (older sister).
If you really want to make the gender clear in this one sentence, you could say, for example:
- Lelaki itu senyum… – The man smiled…
- Kakak saya senyum… – My older sister smiled…
All of these are possible, but they have slightly different nuances:
Dia senyum
- Very common in speech.
- Plain statement: He/She smiles / smiled.
- Simple, neutral.
Dia tersenyum
- Also correct and common.
- Often feels a bit more “story-like” or descriptive, like “He/She smiled (a little / to him/herself)”.
- Can suggest a small, gentle, or somewhat spontaneous smile.
Dia sedang senyum
- Uses sedang = in the middle of doing (progressive aspect).
- Means “He/She is smiling (right now)”.
- Sounds more like you’re describing an ongoing action in progress.
In your sentence, Dia senyum apabila… is natural and simple; Dia tersenyum apabila… would also be very natural in written narrative.
All can translate as “when”, but they differ in formality and typical use:
apabila
- Quite formal, common in writing, news, essays.
- Neutral “when/whenever”.
- Your sentence sounds slightly more formal/standard because of this.
bila
- More informal / conversational.
- In many everyday contexts, people would naturally say:
- Dia senyum bila melihat muka adik saya…
ketika
- Often used like “when/while (at the time that)”.
- Slightly formal; very common in storytelling:
- Dia senyum ketika melihat muka adik saya…
semasa
- Often used for “during / while”:
- Dia senyum semasa melihat… – He/She smiled while seeing…
- Common in both formal and semi-formal contexts.
- Often used for “during / while”:
In your sentence, apabila is perfectly correct; bila or ketika would also be fine with slightly different tone/register.
They are related but not identical:
melihat
- More formal/neutral verb for “to see / to look at”.
- Fits well in standard written Malay.
- melihat muka adik saya = “see my younger sibling’s face”.
lihat
- Can be a base form; in everyday speech, you might hear tengok more often instead.
- In many contexts, lihat and melihat overlap.
tengok
- Very colloquial, everyday; like “look (at)” / “watch”:
- Dia senyum bila tengok muka adik saya…
- Very natural in spoken Malay, less formal in writing.
- Very colloquial, everyday; like “look (at)” / “watch”:
nampak
- Means “can see / to be visible / to appear (to be)”:
- Saya nampak dia – I see him/her / I can see him/her.
- Dia nampak penat – He/She looks tired (appears tired).
- Not exactly the same nuance as melihat, which is more like a deliberate act of looking/seeing.
- Means “can see / to be visible / to appear (to be)”:
So melihat is a good, standard choice here, especially if the text is neutral or written Malay.
Both muka and wajah mean “face”, but there are some tendencies:
muka
- Very common, everyday word for “face”.
- Used in many expressions (e.g. muka surat = page, literally “face of the paper”).
- Completely natural in daily conversation:
- muka adik saya – my younger sibling’s face.
wajah
- Slightly more formal/poetic.
- Common in literature, songs, descriptions:
- wajah yang manis – a sweet face.
- You could say:
- Dia senyum apabila melihat wajah adik saya…
This sounds a bit more literary.
- Dia senyum apabila melihat wajah adik saya…
In your sentence, muka is perfectly normal and natural.
adik saya literally means “my younger sibling” and is:
- Younger than the speaker (not older).
- Gender-neutral: it does not specify brother or sister.
To be more specific:
- adik lelaki saya – my younger brother.
- adik perempuan saya – my younger sister.
Malay usually marks relative age (older/younger) more clearly than gender:
- abang – older brother (or older male).
- kakak – older sister (or older female).
- adik – younger sibling (any gender).
So in your sentence, it just says “my younger sibling”; gender is understood only from context, if anywhere.
Here, yang introduces a relative clause that describes muka adik saya (“my younger sibling’s face”).
Structure:
- muka adik saya – my younger sibling’s face
- yang sangat fokus pada lukisannya – which was very focused on his/her drawing
So the whole phrase means:
“my younger sibling’s face, which was very focused on his/her drawing”.
In this case, yang is necessary to link the noun phrase to its description. Without yang, it would become confusing or ungrammatical:
- ❌ muka adik saya sangat fokus pada lukisannya
This now sounds like “my younger sibling’s face is very focused on his/her drawing” as a simple sentence, and the role of muka is less clearly marked as the thing being described.
So:
- Noun + yang + clause = “the noun that/which/who …”
yang is a key word for building relative clauses in Malay.
Yes, fokus is a borrowed word from English (via other languages) but it is now fully accepted and widely used in Malay.
- sangat fokus = “very focused”
- This is natural and common, especially in modern Malay, in both speech and writing.
You could also express similar ideas with:
- sangat menumpukan perhatian pada lukisannya – very much concentrating on his/her drawing.
- begitu asyik dengan lukisannya – so absorbed in his/her drawing.
But sangat fokus is easy, clear, and idiomatic in today’s Malay.
In fokus pada lukisannya, pada is the normal preposition used with fokus:
- fokus pada X = focused on X.
About the alternatives:
pada
- Very general preposition: “on/at/in/to”.
- Commonly used with mental focus, attention, etc.
- fokus pada kerja, fokus pada pelajaran, fokus pada lukisan.
kepada
- Often used with people or as “to/towards”:
- bercakap kepada dia – speak to him/her.
- baik kepada semua orang – kind to everyone.
- With fokus, pada is more usual and natural:
- fokus kepada is sometimes heard, but fokus pada is more standard/neutral.
- Often used with people or as “to/towards”:
atas
- Literally “on top of / above”.
- Used more for physical position or responsibility:
- buku di atas meja – book on the table.
- bertanggungjawab atas kesilapan itu – responsible for that mistake.
- fokus atas lukisannya would sound odd or non-standard.
So fokus pada lukisannya is the best, most natural choice here.
lukisannya consists of:
- lukisan – drawing / painting.
- -nya – a third-person possessive/definite marker.
Possible meanings of -nya here:
His/her/their drawing:
- lukisannya = “his/her drawing” (most likely meaning in your sentence).
- So: “… focused on his/her drawing.”
- In context, we usually understand that it is the adik saya’s drawing.
The drawing (that we already know about):
- Sometimes -nya marks something definite/known:
- ceritanya – the story (that we’ve been talking about).
- Sometimes -nya marks something definite/known:
If you want to explicitly show that the drawing belongs to your younger sibling, you can also phrase it as:
- lukisan adik saya – my younger sibling’s drawing.
→ … sangat fokus pada lukisan adik saya.
Both pada lukisannya and pada lukisan adik saya would be understood; the original relies on context to know that -nya refers to adik saya.