אם היא תלמד כל השבוע, היא תצליח במבחן.

That is normal Hebrew grammar. For a real future condition, Hebrew usually uses:

אם + future, future

So אם היא תלמד..., היא תצליח... is the expected pattern.

English is different: after if, English usually uses a present form for future meaning, but Hebrew does not.

No. אם can also mean whether in other sentences.

Here, though, it clearly means if, because it introduces a condition followed by a result: If she studies all week, she will succeed on the test.

Here it means learn/study, and in natural English this sentence is often translated with study.

A useful thing to know:

• ללמוד = to learn / to study
• ללמד = to teach

Without vowel marks, תלמד can be ambiguous in writing. Context tells you which meaning is intended. In this sentence, because of כל השבוע and במבחן, the meaning she will study is the natural one.

Yes, the second היא can often be omitted:

אם היא תלמד כל השבוע, תצליח במבחן.

That said, keeping היא is very natural. It makes the sentence clearer and more balanced.

It also helps because forms like תלמד and תצליח can be ambiguous out of context: they can also look like you (masculine singular) future forms. So repeating היא removes any doubt.

Here it means all week / the whole week.

That is because השבוע means the week, so כל השבוע is literally all the week.

Compare:

• כל השבוע = all week / the whole week
• כל שבוע = every week / each week

That little ה makes an important difference.

Hebrew usually does not need a separate word for then in this kind of sentence. The simple structure is enough:

אם היא תלמד כל השבוע, היא תצליח במבחן.

You can add אז for emphasis: אם היא תלמד כל השבוע, אז היא תצליח במבחן.

But in many cases, אז is unnecessary.

The preposition ב often combines with the definite article ה.

So:

• ב + המבחן becomes במבחן in normal unpointed writing

In fully pointed Hebrew, you would see the contraction more clearly.

As for meaning, ב is broader than English in. Depending on context, it can correspond to in, on, or at. With exams, English often says on the test, while Hebrew uses במבחן.

Not exactly, at least not literally.

תצליח במבחן means she will succeed on the test / do well on the test.

Sometimes that may imply passing, but if you want to say she will pass the test more directly, Hebrew often uses: היא תעבור את המבחן

So להצליח במבחן is about success or doing well, while לעבור את המבחן is specifically to pass the test.

A simple transliteration is:

Im hi tilmad kol ha-shavua, hi tatzliach ba-mivchan.

A few pronunciation notes:

• tilmad = stress on the last syllable
• ha-shavua = roughly ha-sha-VU-a
• tatzliach = the ch is like the sound in German Bach
• mivchan = stress on the last syllable

Yes, a little.

The comma is standard and helpful in writing, but the basic meaning stays the same without much change.

You may also see slightly shorter versions, such as: אם היא תלמד כל השבוע, תצליח במבחן.

The full version with both היא pronouns is especially clear and is a very good form for learners to model.