Breakdown of Høsten bliver bedre, jo mere sol haven får i juli og august.
Questions & Answers about Høsten bliver bedre, jo mere sol haven får i juli og august.
Here jo mere is part of the Danish pattern for the more ..., the ....
So:
- jo mere sol ... = the more sun ...
- combined with bedre = the better
Also, this jo is not the everyday jo meaning something like yes or indeed. In this sentence it is a grammatical marker used in comparisons.
Both versions are possible.
The sentence you have starts with the main idea:
- Høsten bliver bedre, jo mere sol haven får i juli og august.
A very common alternative is the more balanced comparative structure:
- Jo mere sol haven får i juli og august, jo bedre bliver høsten.
In English, that is like the difference between:
- The harvest gets better, the more sun the garden gets and
- The more sun the garden gets, the better the harvest gets
The comma separates the two linked clauses.