kono mise de ha, piza mo motikaeri dekimasu ka?

では here is で + は.

• で marks the place where something happens or where a service is available.
• は makes that place the topic, often with a slight contrast: as for at this shop...

So この店では means something like:

• at this shop
• as for this shop
• in this shop’s case

The nuance is a bit broader than just location. It can sound like you are asking about this shop specifically, possibly compared with other shops.

この means this, so この店 means this shop/store.

It is used when the speaker is referring to a specific shop nearby or already clear from context. Without この, 店 would just mean a shop/the shop, depending on context.

So:

• 店では = at the shop
• この店では = at this shop

も means also / too / as well.

So ピザも suggests that pizza is being added to some other item or category. The speaker may already know that other foods can be taken out, and is asking whether pizza can be too.

For example, the nuance could be:

• I know some things are available for takeout; is pizza also available?

If you changed it to ピザは, the sentence would simply focus on pizza as the topic, without the also meaning.

Because も is taking that slot.

In Japanese, も often replaces particles such as は, が, or を, depending on the sentence.

So here, instead of something like an object marker, you get:

• ピザも = pizza too / pizza as well

That is very common. The sentence is not missing a particle; も is doing the job.

持ち帰り comes from the verb 持ち帰る, meaning to take home or to take away.

In this sentence, 持ち帰り is being used in a noun-like way, and combined with できます:

• 持ち帰り = takeout / taking home
• できます = can do / is possible

So 持ち帰りできます means:

• can be taken out
• takeout is possible
• it’s available for takeaway

This kind of pattern is common in Japanese.

Yes. ピザも持ち帰れますか is also possible.

The difference is roughly this:

• 持ち帰れますか directly uses the potential form of the verb 持ち帰る: can take home
• 持ち帰りできますか expresses the idea as takeout is possible

Both are understandable. In shops and restaurants, 持ち帰りできますか often feels very natural because it matches service-related language.

You may also hear:

• ピザもテイクアウトできますか
• ピザもお持ち帰りできますか

These are especially common in restaurant situations.

Here it usually means Is it possible? / Is that available?

So the sentence is not mainly about your physical ability to carry pizza home. It is asking whether the shop allows or offers takeout for pizza.

In English, natural translations might be:

• Can I get pizza to go here too?
• Is pizza also available for takeout at this shop?

So this is really a question about the shop’s service.

か marks the sentence as a question.

So:

• できます = can do / is possible
• できますか = can you do it? / is it possible?

Because the sentence is in polite style, か is the standard way to make it a polite question.

No. Normal Japanese is usually written without spaces.

This sentence would normally be written as:

この店では、ピザも持ち帰りできますか？

The spaces are only there to help learners see the parts more clearly.

The comma 、 is normal, though. It adds a small pause after この店では.

Yes, it is understandable and natural enough, especially in conversation.

That said, depending on the situation, some people might say:

• この店では、ピザも持ち帰りできますか。
• この店では、ピザもテイクアウトできますか。
• この店では、ピザも持ち帰れますか。

In a restaurant context, テイクアウト is extremely common, and お持ち帰り can sound a bit more polite or customer-service-like.

So the original sentence is fine, but there are several natural alternatives.