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The genders refer to the people, not to their roles in relation to each other.
- El paciente = the (male) patient
- paciente is a common-gender noun: it can be el paciente (male) or la paciente (female).
- la médica = the (female) doctor
- médico/médica changes form depending on the doctor’s gender:
- el médico = the male doctor
- la médica = the female doctor
- médico/médica changes form depending on the doctor’s gender:
So the sentence is describing a male patient and a female doctor. If it were a female patient and a male doctor, you’d say:
- La paciente respira despacio mientras el médico toma notas.
You might hear “la médico”, but in modern, especially Peninsular (Spain) Spanish, “la médica” is very common and generally preferred for a female doctor.
Patterns:
- Many jobs now have feminine forms when referring to women:
- el abogado → la abogada
- el ingeniero → la ingeniera
- el médico → la médica
Using la médico is understood, but increasingly sounds old-fashioned or less in line with current usage about gender. In Spain today, la médica is standard when you explicitly mean a woman doctor.
Both “despacio” and “lentamente” are correct; they both mean “slowly”.
despacio
- Very common in spoken Spanish.
- Neutral, everyday word: Habla despacio, Conduce despacio.
lentamente
- Slightly more formal or “textbooky”.
- Often used in written language or when you want to sound more careful: Respira lentamente, Camine lentamente.
In your sentence, “El paciente respira despacio…” sounds very natural and colloquial-neutral. You could replace it with “lentamente” without changing the meaning, but despacio is what you’re more likely to hear in everyday speech.
No, that sounds very odd in Spanish.
Typical position:
- Verb + adverb is the usual order:
- El paciente respira despacio.
- Ella habla lentamente.
You can sometimes move adverbs around for emphasis, but “El paciente despacio respira” is not natural.
If you really wanted to emphasize it, you’d more likely say something like:
- El paciente respira muy despacio.
or - El paciente está respirando despacio.
But the neutral word order keeps the adverb after the verb.
Spanish uses the simple present much more broadly than English, including for actions happening right now.
In English, we strongly prefer:
- “The patient is breathing slowly while the doctor is taking notes.”
In Spanish, both of these are correct:
- El paciente respira despacio mientras la médica toma notas.
- El paciente está respirando despacio mientras la médica está tomando notas.
But:
- The version with respira / toma is more natural and more commonly used, especially in descriptions or narration.
- The progressive (está respirando / está tomando) is usually used when you really want to stress the ongoing nature of the action, or answer the question “What is he doing right now?”
So the sentence as given is exactly what a native would say.
With mientras, Spanish can use either indicative or subjunctive, depending on meaning:
Indicative (toma):
- Used when the action is seen as real, happening, or habitual.
- Here, the speaker is simply describing what is happening:
- El paciente respira despacio mientras la médica toma notas.
- The doctor really is taking notes at that moment.
Subjunctive (tome):
- Used when the action is hypothetical, in the future, or uncertain:
- For example:
- Espera mientras la médica tome notas.
(This sounds like: “Wait while the doctor takes notes” – the action is in the future or not yet happening.)
- Espera mientras la médica tome notas.
In your sentence, the actions are actually occurring at the same time, so the indicative (toma) is correct and natural.
Yes, it’s very similar:
- tomar notas = to take notes (general activity)
- tomar nota (de algo) = to take note (of something), to pay attention to a specific point
So:
- La médica toma notas.
- She is writing down various things; it’s the normal phrase for “is taking notes”.
- La médica toma nota de la alergia del paciente.
- More specific: “The doctor takes note of the patient’s allergy.” (i.e., she particularly notes that detail, or pays attention to it.)
In your sentence, it’s clearly about the general activity of note-taking, so toma notas is exactly right.
No, “hacer notas” is not idiomatic in this sense.
- To say “to take notes” (write notes down), Spanish uses:
- tomar notas
- apuntar cosas, apuntar notas (more like “to jot things down”)
You wouldn’t say hacer notas for this.
So:
- ✔️ La médica toma notas.
- ✔️ La médica apunta todo lo que el paciente dice.
- ✖️ La médica hace notas. (incorrect / unnatural)
You can use either definite or indefinite articles, but they change the meaning:
El paciente respira despacio mientras la médica toma notas.
- We’re talking about specific, known people: the patient and the doctor (for example, in a story, or in a hospital room everyone already knows about).
Un paciente respira despacio mientras una médica toma notas.
- We’re introducing non-specific people: a patient and a doctor. This sounds like you’re describing one example among many, or introducing new characters in a story.
The original sentence assumes these are specific individuals in a known context, so the definite article is the natural choice.
Yes, you can drop the explicit subject, but only if it’s clear from context who is breathing:
- Respira despacio mientras la médica toma notas.
- Grammatically fine.
- Means: He/She breathes slowly while the (female) doctor takes notes.
- The subject “he/she” (él/ella) is understood from context, not stated.
However, if you say:
- Respira despacio mientras la médica toma notas.
and there are multiple possible “he/she” options in the context, it might be ambiguous.
In teaching examples, it’s common to keep “El paciente” so beginners clearly see who the subject is.
Yes, you can place the “mientras” clause at the beginning or in the middle:
- Original:
- El paciente respira despacio mientras la médica toma notas.
- Alternative:
- Mientras la médica toma notas, el paciente respira despacio.
Both are correct and natural.
General rule:
- Subordinate clause (with mientras) can come before or after the main clause.
- When it comes first, we usually use a comma after it.
- When it comes second, we usually don’t use a comma before mientras in simple sentences like this.
Spanish accent marks show where the stress falls when it doesn’t follow the usual rules.
Word: médica
- Syllables: mé-di-ca
- The stress is on the first syllable: MÉ-di-ca.
- The default rule for words ending in vowel, -n, or -s is stress on the second-to-last syllable.
- Without an accent, “medica” would be stressed me-DI-ca.
- To show the actual pronunciation (MÉ-di-ca), Spanish writes an accent: médica.
Compare:
- médico (MÉ-di-co) – doctor (male)
- medico (me-DI-co) – I medicate (from medicar)
So the accent is necessary to distinguish meaning and pronunciation.
No, “paciente” is a common-gender noun: its form doesn’t change, only the article and any adjectives around it do.
- el paciente = the male patient
- la paciente = the female patient
You do not say “pacienta”. The word itself stays paciente.
Examples:
- El paciente está tranquilo. (male)
- La paciente está tranquila. (female)
So you show the gender with the article (el / la) and with adjectives, not by changing paciente itself.