Enumerative markers (kao prvo, kao drugo)

When structuring a formal argument or a list of grievances, such as a complaint letter to a hotel, enumerative markers help organize your points logically. These markers are typically placed at the beginning of a sentence and are separated from the rest of the clause by a comma.

Starting Your Argument

Begin your list of points with kao prvo (firstly). To introduce your next point, use kao drugo (secondly).

Firstly, we want to report the negligence in your hotel.
Kao prvo, želimo prijaviti nemar u vašem hotelu.
Secondly, the hygiene in the bathroom was terrible.
Kao drugo, higijena u kupaonici bila je strašna.

Expanding on Your Points

To add supporting details or introduce further complaints, use the markers nadalje (furthermore) and štoviše (moreover).

Furthermore, such behavior is unacceptable for this hotel.
Nadalje, takvo ponašanje je nedopustivo za ovaj hotel.
Moreover, the reception ignored our problem the whole weekend.
Štoviše, recepcija je ignorirala naš problem cijeli vikend.

These markers are highly useful when building a case for a specific demand, such as requesting odšteta (compensation).

Furthermore, because of bad hygiene we demand compensation.
Nadalje, zbog loše higijene tražimo odštetu.
Moreover, it is expected of you to pay compensation for everything.
Štoviše, od vas se očekuje da platite odštetu za sve.

Concluding the Argument

To introduce your final point or summarize the ultimate consequence of the issue, use naposljetku (finally).

Finally, that negligence destroyed our whole vacation.
Naposljetku, taj nemar nam je uništio cijeli odmor.
Finally, we consider that such an attitude is unacceptable.
Naposljetku, smatramo da je takav odnos nedopustiv.

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